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平行结构例句 ①:封闭(两个 Tag)和不封闭关联词(一个 Tag)的区别
- Most fossils of species X were found in Tennessee or Kentucky ✔️
- Most fossils of species X were found in Tennessee or in Kentucky ✔️
- Most fossils of species X were found either in Tennessee or Kentucky ❌
- Most fossils of species X were found either in Tennessee or in Kentucky ✔️
- Most fossils of species X were found in either Tennessee or in Kentucky ❌
- Most fossils of species X were found in either Tennessee or Kentucky ✔️
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💡 非封闭平行,从 RIGHT 到 LEFT(右边决定左边),因为只有右边一部分「TAGGED」
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平行结构例句 ②
- I want to eat fish & chips, drink Mountain Dew, and go to sleep ✔️
- I want to eat fish & chips, drink Mountain Dew, and I want to go to sleep ❌
- I want to eat fish & chips, to drink Mountain Dew, and to go to sleep ✔️
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💡 如果列举三个及以上的东西,COMMAS 和 AND 都是 TAG
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MODIFIERS 不一定,也不应该和 MAIN ACTION 平行
- Joe ran down the street, flapping his arms wildly and screaming at the top of his lung ✔️
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如果列举三个及以上的东西 → 必须 有一个 COMMA 在最后的 AND 之前
- X, Y and Z ❌
- X, Y, and Z ✔️
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不是所有的平行都会格外地完美(连 MODIFIERS 的结构都是一样的),但如果有就一定要选
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平行结构例句 ③:RIGHT 到 LEFT
- food that is nutritious for cats but that is poisonous for dogs ✔️
- food that is nutritious for cats but is poisonous for dogs ✔️
- food that is nutritious for cats but poisonous for dogs ✔️
- hand signs that natives use and that appear in local rituals ✔️
- hand signs that natives use and appear in local rituals ❌
- hand signs used by natives and appearing in local rituals ✔️(不完美平行)
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不完美平行
- They argue just as frequently and about the same topic as the couple living next door to them ✔️(判断标准:平行结构单独成句)
- 在官方问题中,大部分的平行都是 完美 的
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永远不可以用介词来结束修饰句
- the restaurant (that) we ate at ❌
- the restaurant at which we ate ✔️
- the person I spoke with ❌
- the person with whom I spoke ✔️
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Compare To 和 Compare With
- compared to 和 compared with 是完全一样的
- 在句子中如果使用 COMPARED TO 或 COMPARED WITH ,那就不要再用任何有关比较的词
- twice as much...compared to ❌
- twice as much...as ✔️
- more/less...compared to ❌
- more/less than ✔️
- 28 percent of American husbands were married to wives with more years of schooling, compared to 6 percent in 1971 ✔️(仅仅陈述 NUMBERS,无 more, less, N times…)
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Comparisons 永远关乎于 平行结构
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你不会在没有 COMMA 的情况下使用 WHICH